The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie and bar charts illustrate the places and kinds of
dance
classes youngsters in an Australian city are participating in. Use synonyms
Overall
, private Linking Words
studios
are the most prevalent destinations for practicing Use synonyms
while
college-based Linking Words
studios
are the least appealing. Use synonyms
In addition
, most children under 11 prefer ballet Linking Words
while
modern Linking Words
dance
is the most attractive to teenagers under 16 years old.
In terms of amenities, the rate of private Use synonyms
studios
is the most striking, which accounts for 48% - twice as much as the percentage of school halls. Use synonyms
In contrast
, only 10% of Linking Words
dance
activities take place at college-based Use synonyms
studios
, which is only approximately half of the proportion of community halls and other locations.
Turning to the genres of Use synonyms
dance
, roughly 600 juniors study ballet which is double the number of middle school students. Use synonyms
Next,
the quantities of young people participating in tap Linking Words
dance
in both age groups are quite similar, which are around 450 and 420 for those under 11 and 11 to 16 years old. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, more than 500 youngsters in the older group get involved in modern Linking Words
dance
, which is higher than the other age group by 200.Use synonyms
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