The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie and bar charts illustrate the places and kinds of
dance
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classes youngsters in an Australian city are participating in.
Overall
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, private
studios
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are the most prevalent destinations for practicing
while
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college-based
studios
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are the least appealing.
In addition
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, most children under 11 prefer ballet
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modern
dance
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is the most attractive to teenagers under 16 years old. In terms of amenities, the rate of private
studios
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is the most striking, which accounts for 48% - twice as much as the percentage of school halls.
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, only 10% of
dance
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activities take place at college-based
studios
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, which is only approximately half of the proportion of community halls and other locations. Turning to the genres of
dance
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, roughly 600 juniors study ballet which is double the number of middle school students.
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the quantities of young people participating in tap
dance
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in both age groups are quite similar, which are around 450 and 420 for those under 11 and 11 to 16 years old.
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but not least, more than 500 youngsters in the older group get involved in modern
dance
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, which is higher than the other age group by 200.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, studios with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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