The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie and bar charts illustrate the places and kinds of
dance
classes youngsters in an Australian city are participating in. Overall
, private studios
are the most prevalent destinations for practicing while
college-based studios
are the least appealing. In addition
, most children under 11 prefer ballet while
modern dance
is the most attractive to teenagers under 16 years old.
In terms of amenities, the rate of private studios
is the most striking, which accounts for 48% - twice as much as the percentage of school halls. In contrast
, only 10% of dance
activities take place at college-based studios
, which is only approximately half of the proportion of community halls and other locations.
Turning to the genres of dance
, roughly 600 juniors study ballet which is double the number of middle school students. Next,
the quantities of young people participating in tap dance
in both age groups are quite similar, which are around 450 and 420 for those under 11 and 11 to 16 years old. Last
but not least, more than 500 youngsters in the older group get involved in modern dance
, which is higher than the other age group by 200.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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