The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides a detailed overview of the evolutionary process of the horse, highlighting the significant increase in body
size
and the structural evolution of its foot
bones.
Overall
, the development of horses has undergone four distinct stages over a span of 40 million
years
, beginning with Eohippus and culminating in the modern horse. Additionally
, the bone structure
of their feet has become simpler, while
their bodies have grown larger over time.
As shown in the diagram, the earliest horses, scientifically known as Eohippus, first appeared 40 million
years
ago. These species were characterized by their small body size
and complex foot
bone structure
, which featured four slender digits. Over the following 10 million
years
, the presence of Mesohippus was recorded, displaying a larger body size
and a foot
structure
with only three digits, the middle one being the largest.
Approximately 15 million
years
ago, while
the foot
bone structure
of Merychippus remained identical to that of Mesohippus, its overall
size
increased significantly. Finally
, the modern horse, the largest among its predecessors, evolved a completely different foot
structure
. All toes fused into a single hoof, enhancing its upright posture and stability.Submitted by Mads on
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