The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides a detailed overview of the evolutionary process of the horse, highlighting the significant increase in body
size
and the structural evolution of its Use synonyms
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bones.
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, the development of horses has undergone four distinct stages over a span of 40 Linking Words
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, beginning with Eohippus and culminating in the modern horse. Use synonyms
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of their feet has become simpler, Use synonyms
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their bodies have grown larger over time.
As shown in the diagram, the earliest horses, scientifically known as Eohippus, first appeared 40 Linking Words
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ago. These species were characterized by their small body Use synonyms
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, which featured four slender digits. Over the following 10 Use synonyms
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, the presence of Mesohippus was recorded, displaying a larger body Use synonyms
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structure
with only three digits, the middle one being the largest.
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of Merychippus remained identical to that of Mesohippus, its Use synonyms
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size
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Finally
, the modern horse, the largest among its predecessors, evolved a completely different Linking Words
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structure
. All toes fused into a single hoof, enhancing its upright posture and stability.Use synonyms
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