You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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why some individuals prefer to emigrate from

England

to other nations, and why some

people

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to stay in the United Kingdom in 2007. A glance at the graph reveals that the most significant

reason

for travelling to other countries and staying in the

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job.

However

people

did not like to emigrate to other countries for formal

study

over the period. In 2007, just

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under

a third of

people

(30%) stayed in

England

for

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job, (which was the most momentous

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over the period), just ahead of the proportion of

main

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reason

for immigrants which was

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study

at roughly

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quarter (26%) in the

in 2007.

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, 29% of

people

prefered

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preferred

to emigrate from

England

for

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job in the

, as opposed to the major

reason

for travelling for looking for work at 22% in 2007.

In contrast

, only a tiny fraction of individuals travelled to other nations for formal

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4% in 2007. ( which was the lowest proportion of main reasons for emigrating over the whole year).

Furthermore

, the percentage of

people

who stayed in the

because of looking for work was

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twice as

people

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many people

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who had no

reason

study

England

at 12% and 6%, respectively.

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