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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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 table provides key information about the breakdown of the most popular languages by original English speakers
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UK
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 studying Foreign
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 Learning by 2020.
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.The
women
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 with
Mandarin
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 , French and Polish languages are thin
men
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 .If we talk about the
men
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 who speak Arabic ,German, Japanese,and Welsh are more than
women
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 Spanish speakers in
men
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 or
women
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 do the same things.
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 . The
women
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 said , that
Mandarin
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 is the highest number
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27% followed by Spanish , Arabic,and French the same thing
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 10% .The lowest
language
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 is Italian by 4%. In
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,
the
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 man said ,who
talk
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speak
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 the Arabic
language
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, is the most
thing
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by
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22% ,
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 that Spanish
language
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by
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19% the same number of
women
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 said .
the
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German and
Mandarin
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 the same percentage
by
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 14%, and the lowest
language
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 is Italian at 3%
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.if we comparisons between
men
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 and
women
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 we will note that in
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 is higher than
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 .But in Arabic,
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men
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 more than
women
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words language, women, mandarin, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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