You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,
Dear Pat,
I hope you are doing well. I writing to let you know that I heard about you that you are
voluntaring
at Correct your spelling
volunteering
Christmas
festival. Your sister told me when I met her Correct article usage
the Christmas
last
week in a garden. Could you please tell me the date and location of the Christmas festival?
I want to know that
what type of work you will be doing there. Correct word choice
apply
In addition
, I really like to participate in the event as I often doing
Wrong verb form
do
this
type activity
during my free time. Change preposition
of activity
Last
week, I participated in the
charity event in which they were raising funds for Correct article usage
a
the
cancer patients.
Could you please ask the organizer Correct article usage
apply
about
they need more people or not? If they do, tell me how can I apply for that. I really want to contribute to the community and it will help me to increase my networking.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Vishal JangralaChange preposition
if
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coherence cohesion
Ensure grammatical accuracy and improve sentence structure for clarity.
task achievement
Maintain consistent formal tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Clear greeting and closing present in the letter.
task achievement
All parts of the prompt are addressed adequately.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite