The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different contries between 1930 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different contries between 1930 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of
cars
per household in a particular European nation from 1971 to 2001.
It is clear that
car
ownership in
this
country rose over the period shown.
While
the percentage of
families
with one, and two or more
cars
increased, the figure for households without a
car
decreased. In 1971, nearly half of the residents in
this
country did not possess a
car
,
while
about 30% of
families
owned 1
car
, and around 18% of
families
owned 2 or more
cars
. Ten years later, the figures for those with no
car
or 1
car
dropped to just over 40% and 30% respectively. Meanwhile,
families
with 2 or more
cars
increased to just under 30%. 1991 saw a dramatic rise in 1
car
ownership, peaking at almost 50%,
while
the percentage of
families
with no
car
, or 2 or more
cars
, both decreased. In 2001, the percentage of
families
with no
car
, or 2 or more
cars
, was about equal, at just under 30%,
while
about 44% of households owned 1
car
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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