One of the main
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of
parents
is caring
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their
children
. Most of the people think that mothers and fathers should take
a parenting Correct the article-noun agreement
parenting courses
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courses
to be a good parent. I partially agree with that idea and in
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of that statement.
On the one hand,
however
today most grandparents
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with their
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,
that is
why
parents
should take a special course which
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to learn how to communicate with
children
and
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them to be
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necessary
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society. In the past that kind of
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by grandparents.
Furthermore
, nowadays
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is more accelerated because of
this
most people become more impatient and stressed. As we know
parents
should be patient and calm with their
children
and
courses
help them to learn how to control themselves when their
children
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them.
On the other hand
, most people think that parenting
courses
are useless. Because in our society there are enough cases and situations that help to learn how to be a good parent.
Such
as by caring
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relatives’
children
parents
can learn different parenting skills like how to
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with
children
that help them in the future.
most
parents
think that
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kindFix the agreement mistake
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of
courses
are worthless
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cost and
that is
why they do not
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to go parenting
courses
.
In conclusion.
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parenting
courses
are expensive and
parents
can learn parenting skills with their relatives’
children
they should go to the parenting
courses
because
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courses
help them to be patient and calm in every depth of the parenting life.