The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The given pie charts show the proportion of three unhealthy compositions that are consumed at four different times a day, which are
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, saturated fat, and added sugar.
Overall
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, It is evident that the smallest proportions of all categories are at breakfast time,
while
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both
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and saturated fat are dominant at dinner. During breakfast,
sodium
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has the lowest percentage compared to the other two that have the same number, which only creates a slight difference between 14% and 16%. At lunch, all the categories considerably rise up, nearly half of
breakfast’s
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the breakfast’s
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proportion, placing
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in second place with 29%. At snack time, added sugar holds the largest percentage with 42%, making a dramatic difference to
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and saturated fat which only have 14% and 21%, respectively.
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, it is the opposite at dinner because added sugar tremendously declines to 23% of consumption.
On the other hand
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,
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and saturated fat proportions increase to 43% and 37%, putting
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as the highest percentage in all categories at four different times of consumption.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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