The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities form 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the proportion of the total population in
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such
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the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
, Indonesia
living in cities from 1970 to 2020 and Correct word choice
and Indonesia
also
foresees for 2030 and 2040
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it
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Philippines
had the most city residents among the countries with 32% and Correct article usage
the Philippines
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with 30%, then
followed by Thailand
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Indonesia
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Malaysia
and Indonesia
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Malaysia
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Philippines
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the Philippines
Thailand
with around 55% and 45% respectively.Submitted by mahyarnaseri on
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