The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how to produce the
pulp
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and
paper
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to make
paper
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bales and
paper
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rolls.
Overall
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, the basic way to make
pulp
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and
paper
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items
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is a
man- made
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man-made
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linear process with six steps for
pulp
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and around five to six steps
rely
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on
that
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the
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paper
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items
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.
This
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process starts with finding
woods-the
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the
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natural ingredients and ends with producing a
pulp
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screen and many other
paper
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items
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such
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as
paper
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boxes,
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paper
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and paper
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for printing. First of all, we need to take logs from trees in the produce forest ,
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then
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and then
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use
it
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them
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to chip the amount of purchased chips which are brought to the digester. At the same time, the
pulp
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from the previous step will take a washer and become a
pulp
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screen. After completing some basic steps to make
pulp
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, the clean
pulp
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will make two types of
items
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.
Firstly
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, it is
paper
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bales that begin with forming
pulp
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and bring it to dry in sunny weather. It continued to roll to a
pulp
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reel which used a cutter to make perfect
paper
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boxes.
Secondly
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, we moved to refined
paper
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for printing.
Instead
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of using the
pulp
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former , in
this
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product
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product,
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we need to use the
pulp
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cleaners and
also
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bring dryers. The proportion of
pulp
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dryers will be pressed by a machine that becomes
paper
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dryers and packed into rolls. By making
pulp
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and
paper
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, many useful
items
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are invented for humans .
Moreover
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,
this
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also
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contributes to protecting our environment by replacing some plastic things.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pulp, paper, items with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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