The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how to produce the

pulp

and

paper

to make

paper

bales and

paper

rolls.

Overall

, the basic way to make

pulp

and

paper

items

is a

man- made

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man-made

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linear process with six steps for

pulp

and around five to six steps

rely

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relying

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on

that

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the

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paper

items

.

This

process starts with finding

woods-the

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the

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natural ingredients and ends with producing a

pulp

screen and many other

paper

items

such

as

paper

boxes,

paper

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and paper

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for printing. First of all, we need to take logs from trees in the produce forest ,

then

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and then

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use

it

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them

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to chip the amount of purchased chips which are brought to the digester. At the same time, the

pulp

from the previous step will take a washer and become a

pulp

screen. After completing some basic steps to make

pulp

, the clean

pulp

will make two types of

items

.

Firstly

, it is

paper

bales that begin with forming

pulp

and bring it to dry in sunny weather. It continued to roll to a

pulp

reel which used a cutter to make perfect

paper

boxes.

Secondly

, we moved to refined

paper

for printing.

Instead

of using the

pulp

former , in

this

product

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we need to use the

pulp

cleaners and

also

bring dryers. The proportion of

pulp

dryers will be pressed by a machine that becomes

paper

dryers and packed into rolls. By making

pulp

and

paper

, many useful

items

are invented for humans .

Moreover

,

this

also

contributes to protecting our environment by replacing some plastic things.