Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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or understand their personality it can help them pleasing and those buddy is like safe zone.
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perspective
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task achievement
The essay presents an understanding of both views regarding the friends we choose based on agreement or differences in opinions. However, there's a need to fully develop these viewpoints with more specific examples and further explanation to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
While there's a basic structure in the essay with an introduction and some paragraphs explaining the views, it would benefit from more clear and logical transitions between ideas and paragraphs. Consider using linking words to connect your ideas more naturally.
coherence cohesion
Be sure to proofread your essay to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence construction. This will help in expressing your ideas clearly and make the essay more coherent.
task achievement
You attempt to present both sides of the argument, which shows an ability to engage with different perspectives on the topic.
coherence cohesion
The essay begins with a clear introduction and presents your opinion, which is a good start for structuring your ideas.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.