You work for a company. You have seen some information about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter: • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.
Dear Mrs. Smith
Because we are working in the Web Design Company I think that a good course will help me to improve my ability. I found a perfect course that will give me a new experience.
In addition
, with my future knowledge, I will be able to explain to my colleagues what is new in the world today. To be clear, the course will start next month, on the 6th of December. Importantly, it will last
just 1 week and also
it will start at 9 a.m. As a result
, with my ability, I can make big progress in working groups. Furthermore
, it will increase company financials because people will tend to new information and new designs in their projects. I would appreciate it if you offered me some free days. If it is not possible, you can also
give me the necessary equipment or pay for it. For example
a good computer or a special tablet.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing the content in a more structured manner, distributing ideas evenly across paragraphs to further improve the clarity of your letter.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples on how the course content directly aligns with your current job responsibilities.
coherence cohesion
The letter contains a clear greeting and closing, maintaining a professional tone throughout.
task achievement
The tone remains appropriate for a professional setting, focusing on benefits to both the individual and the company.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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