The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares data about how many people used 8 various ways namely, public,
private
systems for travel in the UK at two points in time that was in 1985 and 2000.
Correct word choice
and private
Overall
, it was important that the number of people who travelled, and all factors other than walking, bicycle, and local bus
increased car in both times was the popular way.
According to
the chart, at the start, Car
, the main transportation that people used in both years, formed 3199; Correct article usage
the Car
then
it climbed to 4806 in 2000. Other and Local bus
composed roughly the same figure in 1985; Fix the agreement mistake
buses
additionally
, Other rose by 1350 and reported 585 in 2000; in contrast
, Local bus
nearly 150 reduced to 274 in 2000.
The graph demonstrates that Fix the agreement mistake
buses
Train
constituted 289 in 1985; Fix the agreement mistake
Trains
thereafter
, it improved to 366 in 2000. However
, Walking declined from 255 in 1985 to 237 in 2000. Long distance
Add a hyphen
Long-distance
bus
and Bicycle approximately made up the same number in 1985 after that Fix the agreement mistake
buses
Long distance
Correct your spelling
Long-distance
bus
jumped to 124 in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
while
another one fell to 41 in 2000. Taxi , the last
item in 1985, increased from 13 in 1985 to 42 in 2000.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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