The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The provided diagram demonstrates the method of manufacturing
bricks
for the construction sector.
In brief, the given illustration explains a 7-step, man-made, linear process of creating Use synonyms
bricks
, which begins with digging the clay and culminates in packaging, followed by packing and delivery.
The very first step of Use synonyms
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particular process is digging, which a special digger must be utilized for. The following steps are to roll the dug material, put it through a metal grid and Linking Words
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, after mixing with sand and water compound, form Linking Words
bricks
using either a mould or a wire cutter.
When it comes to the Use synonyms
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stages, they include placing formed Linking Words
bricks
into a drying oven for between 24 and 48 hours, Use synonyms
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, into a clin with a moderate (200c-980c) and, Linking Words
consequently
, a high temperature (870c-1300c). Linking Words
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bricks
must be placed into a cooling chamber for a few days. The very Use synonyms
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the diagram, are packaging and delivery by trucks.Linking Words
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