The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the rate of employment in three sectors in the United Kingdom between 2000 to 2010.
It is clear that
the self-employed and public sector
increased during
10 years, but the private Change preposition
over
sector
of the UK economy decreased at the same time although
it had the most amount of rates rather to
the two other sectors.
The amount of self-employed jumped around 12% during 10 years except from 2002 to mid-2003 witch it slightly declined. Change preposition
than
Moreover
, public sector
rates rose as same as the self-employed section but went down by around one year from 2005 to 2006.
In 2000, the private sector
had the most
proportion compared with other sections but dramatically dropped around 28 per cent and became the lowest rate in the UK economy in 2010.Correct word choice
highest
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