Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effect on a children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This

is the

age

of

technology

age

. We know all

children

know

technology

. They grow up with

technology

.

Technology

same time good but sometimes negatively effective for

children

. We should be limited to

television

or

computer

games

. If we do not limit the

child

do not know other skills. The

child

must know

computer

games

or

television

because ıf the

child

does not know

this

they become a stranger. Some parents never

use

technology

and they believe it has a negative effect on

children

. I do not agree

on

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with

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this

opinion because we should know

technology

because

age

is

technology

age

. If we do not really uncomfortable live for us. We

use

a

phone

for payment and we

use

a

television

for global communications. We should know

computer

games

to play

a friends

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friends

a friend

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. Some people certainly do not

use

and do not allow for

child

use

a

phone

or

television

this

is not true. In my opinion, the

child

knows all

technology

things but they have a

use

a limit.

For example

, the

child

only uses a

phone

or

computer

games

for only one hour a day. If they do not have enough time and they want to a lot of time the

phone

or

computer

automatically closes. In

this

situation

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situation,

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the

child

knows

Add the particle

knows to

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use

technology

and they do not have negative effects. The parents

use

a

phone

or

computer

and they

use

allow the

child

to for a limited.

Children

should benefit from

technology

in a way that allows the

children

to develop.