Task 1 The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The
grpah
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graph
illustrates the
production
of four different grains by a country between 2010 and 2015.
Also
, it gives an expected
production
till the year 2030. The quantities measured in
million
metric
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. It can be
cleary
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seen that all four grains experienced varying
dgrees
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degrees
of
increase
in
production
and
anticipated
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to continue
same
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the same
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pattern till
th
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the
year 2030. Barley is expected to double in
production
by 2030. In 2010, wheat started by 100
million
metric
tons
then
experienced
gradual
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a gradual
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increase
before reaching 107
million
metric
tons
in 2020.
This
upward trend is expected to
continu
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continue
till 2030
till
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reaching 110
million
metric
tons
.
On the other hand
, barley started
intially
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initially
with 50
million
metric
tons
and increased by 30% in 2010 and it is anticipated to double in
production
by 2030 reaching 100
million
metric
tons
. In
comparsion
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comparison
, Maize witnessed a slight
increase
in
production
over
ten-year
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a ten-year
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period by 0.5
million
metric
tons
and it is expected to
increase
by another 0.5
million
metric
tons
by the year 2030. For rice, it started
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24.7
then
experienced fluctuation between 2015 and 2020 before ending at 24.5 in 2020 and its
production
is projected to
increase
by 1
million
metric
tons
by 2030.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, increase, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • metric tons
  • trend
  • projected
  • notable
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • consistent
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • forecast
  • extrapolate
  • economic impact
  • environmental factors
  • yield
  • cultivation
  • sustainable
  • harvest
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sector
  • quantify
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