The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

grpah

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graph

illustrates the

production

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of four different grains by a country between 2010 and 2015.

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, it gives an expected

production

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till the year 2030. The quantities measured in

million

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metric

tones

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tons

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. It can be

cleary

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clearly

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seen that all four grains experienced varying

dgrees

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degrees

increase

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production

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and

anticipated

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are anticipated

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to continue

same

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the same

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pattern till

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the

year 2030. Barley is expected to double in

production

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by 2030. In 2010, wheat started by 100

million

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metric

tons

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then

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experienced

gradual

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a gradual

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increase

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before reaching 107

million

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metric

tons

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in 2020.

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upward trend is expected to

continu

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continue

till 2030

till

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apply

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reaching 110

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metric

tons

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On the other hand

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, barley started

intially

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initially

with 50

million

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metric

tons

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and increased by 30% in 2010 and it is anticipated to double in

production

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by 2030 reaching 100

million

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metric

tons

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. In

comparsion

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comparison

, Maize witnessed a slight

increase

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production

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over

ten-year

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a ten-year

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period by 0.5

million

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metric

tons

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and it is expected to

increase

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by another 0.5

million

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metric

tons

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by the year 2030. For rice, it started

with

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24.7

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experienced fluctuation between 2015 and 2020 before ending at 24.5 in 2020 and its

production

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is projected to

increase

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by 1

million

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metric

tons

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by 2030.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, increase, tons with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

metric tons
trend
projected
notable
increment
decrement
fluctuation
stability
peak
trough
consistent
proportion
comparison
forecast
extrapolate
economic impact
environmental factors
yield
cultivation
sustainable
harvest
increase
decrease
sector
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