Which would you choose a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

It is true that fewer

people

are more satisfied with lower-paying jobs as they like to give priority to their family

members

and balance their personal and professional

life

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instead

of earning money.

However

, I agree with the former point of view because I think money is an essential element to enjoy the

ameneties

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amenities

of

life

and

also

to fulfil their responsibilities towards their family

members

. There are various reasons why I support the first view. Most individuals have a dream to earn a name and fame in their

life

which could be possible only if they give 100% to their

work

rather than spending it on using social networking sites. By doing

work

so long hours,

people

will be able to lead a lavish and luxurious lifestyle which not only

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their status in the community but

also

makes them more efficient and enjoyable.

Moreover

, competition is now everywhere. Every person works hard to secure their position in the company and try to get a promotion which is possible only if they put great emphasis on improving their skills

such

as communication, co-operation and problem-solving etcetera.

Furthermore

, high wages are required to fulfil the dreams of their family

members

and

also

for the better future of their children by providing proper education to them.

last

but not least, most

people

do

work

at a certain age and

the

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rest of

the

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life

they try to lead their

life

with relaxation and with their family

members

.

for

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instance,

people

start

work

from

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the age of 20 and

work

until the age of 55 years. To handle any kind of emergency situation, they have to save some earnings for unforeseen circumstances.

To sum up

, choosing

from

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high-paying jobs and

the

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lower-paying

job

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jobs

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is not a difficult task but

to

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maintaining a balance between them is significantly important. I prefer a higher-paying job

is

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the best option to access a variety of facilities and to accomplish their responsibilities for their loved ones.