The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram presented displays the recycling cycle of
glass
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. The cycle begins with the collection of
glass
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items in specific points or rubbishes and
end
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ends
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with the transformation of the recycled
glass
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into a new shape and its delivery. It is divided
in
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into
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6 different steps.
Firstly
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, the
glass
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is gathered in a special container which facilitates the recollection.
Then
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, the
glass
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obtained is transported to a treatment plant where is
proccesed
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processed
. Before the process takes place, the
glass
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is treated by a washing and
sterilisign
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sterilising
sterilizing
machine.
Secondly
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, once it has covered all the prior steps, the treated
glass
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is broken into pieces and melted.
Subsequently
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, the melted
glass
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is poured in
mould
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a mould
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to
shapen
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shape
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the final product.
This
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step is carried out using moulding
mahcines
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machines
. Ultimately, the final product is delivered to the final point of distribution,
such
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as supermarkets. From these distribution points the
glass
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is utilized and
then
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, the cycle commences again.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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