This bar graph shows the number of days lost due to injury per worker for five countries.There are three tome periods shown begining witn the year 1991 and ending in 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of workers who were absent
due to
sickness in 5 countries including the Netherlands, France, Sweden, the UK, and Germany over the 10-year Linking Words
period
from 1991 to 2001.
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Overall
, what stands out from the figure is that the Netherlands experienced the highest amount of absent workers with some fluctuations Linking Words
whereas
the lowest number was shown in Germany and the UK with fewer fluctuations during Linking Words
this
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period
.
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To begin
with, around 5% of injuries of labourers were witnessed in 1991 which rose over by 1992 and dropped to nearly 4% in 1996. After that, an upward trend was witnessed up to 2001 about 6% which was top of the graph. Linking Words
However
, a continuous downward experience in France which fell down 5% to 3% and Linking Words
then
remained stable over the rest of the Linking Words
period
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In addition
, Sweden was leveled off up to 1996 and after that, there was a significant increase of approximately 5% during Linking Words
this
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period
.
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Finally
, the UK and Germany both saw a steady fluctuation above or below 2% in the years 1991 and 2001, respectively.Linking Words
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