The graph shows the transport modes in European city between 1960 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar graph depicts the percentage of travellers in a certain European city using four transport categories between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, non-emission
trasportation
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transportation
fell significantly
while
car users showed the opposite trend.
In contrast
, bus usage fluctuated with
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proportion in 1980. Looking in more detail, in 1960,
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citizens tended to walk for their mobility with 34% of the total travellers, followed by cycling which accounted for a quarter.
On the other hand
,
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represented approximately 5% of usage in 1960, making them the least preferred option. Bus transport mode climbed almost 7%, from 16% in 1960 to 26% in 1980, before dropping to 15% in 2000. in 2000,
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became the most preferred mode of transportation, skyrocketing to surpass other alternatives for a total of 35%. Walking and biking experienced a descending trend, with a small gap between each other in 2000, falling to 9% and 6%, respectively.
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