The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph illustrates the information about
percentage
of consumers who bought Add an article
the percentage
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
in five Australian cities.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest number of Linking Words
people
have Use synonyms
been
bought Unnecessary verb
apply
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in Use synonyms
Linking Words
last
4 weeks in Melbourne and Hobart Correct article usage
the last
while
Linking Words
least
number of Correct article usage
the least
item
that the customers Fix the agreement mistake
items
ask
is fresh Wrong verb form
asked
coffee
in both Brisbane and Use synonyms
Adelaide
.
When considering Use synonyms
People
who live in Melbourne and Hobart their first Use synonyms
choise
is to visit Correct your spelling
choice
cafe
for Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
tea
or Use synonyms
coffee
which is just below 65% Use synonyms
while
, Linking Words
people
in Brisbane it is just 55%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, nearly 50% Linking Words
Use synonyms
Adelaide
residents went for Change preposition
of Adelaide
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
. Both Brisbane and Use synonyms
Adelaide
Use synonyms
people
have less Use synonyms
preferance
for fresh Correct your spelling
preference
coffee
which Use synonyms
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
neary
35% respectively.
In Correct your spelling
nearly
comparition
Correct your spelling
comparison
of
instant Change preposition
to
coffee
and fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
of
all five cities Change preposition
from
brought
more instant Correct your spelling
bought
coffe
than fresh Correct your spelling
coffee
coffee
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
people
who live in Sydney like both instant Use synonyms
coffee
and fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in relatively same numbers. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
Adelaide
Use synonyms
people
prefer more Use synonyms
intant
Correct your spelling
instant
intent
coffee
than Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, people, adelaide with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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