The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph illustrates the information about
percentage
of consumers who bought Add an article
the percentage
coffee
and tea
in five Australian cities.
Overall
, the highest number of people
have been
bought Unnecessary verb
apply
coffee
or tea
in last
4 weeks in Melbourne and Hobart Correct article usage
the last
while
least
number of Correct article usage
the least
item
that the customers Fix the agreement mistake
items
ask
is fresh Wrong verb form
asked
coffee
in both Brisbane and Adelaide
.
When considering People
who live in Melbourne and Hobart their first choise
is to visit Correct your spelling
choice
cafe
for Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
tea
or coffee
which is just below 65% while
, people
in Brisbane it is just 55%. In contrast
, nearly 50% Adelaide
residents went for Change preposition
of Adelaide
coffee
or tea
. Both Brisbane and Adelaide
people
have less preferance
for fresh Correct your spelling
preference
coffee
which are
Unnecessary verb
apply
neary
35% respectively.
In Correct your spelling
nearly
comparition
Correct your spelling
comparison
of
instant Change preposition
to
coffee
and fresh coffee
, people
of
all five cities Change preposition
from
brought
more instant Correct your spelling
bought
coffe
than fresh Correct your spelling
coffee
coffee
. However
, people
who live in Sydney like both instant coffee
and fresh coffee
in relatively same numbers. In addition
, Adelaide
people
prefer more intant
Correct your spelling
instant
intent
coffee
than coffee
or tea
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