The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.

While

the first bar chart illustrates the

precentages

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percentages

percentage

of using electrical appliances between the

years

1920 to 2019, the second

ones

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shows the

amounts

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amount

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of time that each household used these appliances per

week

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

,

although

the

amounts

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amount

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of all

appliances usages

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appliance usage

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had

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has

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increased over these

years

, the amounts of hours per

week

had been

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has

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dramatically decreased.

To begin

with, the

precentage

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percentage

of using washing

mashine

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machines

had

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experienced a

flactuated

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fluctuated

trend over these

years

and reached

top

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of

approximatly

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approximately

80

percent

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per cent

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at the end

of the period.

Moreover

,

while

the amount of using

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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started at the point of

near

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nearly

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5

percent

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per cent

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in 1920 ,after 60

years

dramatic

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experiences in 1980 it reached about 100

percent

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per cent

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and remained

stability

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until 2019.

Additionally

, vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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had

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have

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experienced a soar upward trend over

this

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years

.

On the other hand

,

while

in 1920, per

house work

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housework

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took time about 50 hours a

week

,

this

trend showed

a

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updown

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up-down

experience toward these

years

and reached

at

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apply

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10 hours a

week

at the end

of the

periode

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period

.