The graph below shows the percentage of GDP government spending on health, education and road & railways from 2000 to 2025 in a particular country.

The line graph provides information about the amount of GDP

government

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the government

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expend

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spends

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on

health

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, education and

road

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& railways between 25 years from 2000 to 2025 in a specific country.

Overall

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,the expenditure

of

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on

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education and

road

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facilities slightly decrease during 25 years.

while

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,

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apply

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health

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became more valuable and

government

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the government

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expending

highest

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the highest

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amount of money for

this

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zone. In 2000,4% of GDP

alocated

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allocated

to

health

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and

road

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& railroad but the cost of

health

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dramatically increased to 7.2% .

while

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the

road

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proportion

remain

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remained

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steadty

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steady

and it

was increase

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was increased

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from 4% in 2000 to 4.5 by 2015 and

then

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suddenly

decrease

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decreased

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to 3.9% in 2025. The highest proportion of GDP spending

for

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on

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education in 2000 but it

is

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apply

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went down from 5% in 2000 to 4% by 2025.

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also

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also,

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it

jomped

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jumped

to 6.9% in 2005 and had more increase close to 7% before suddenly drop.