The graph below shows the percentage of GDP government spending on health, education and road & railways from 2000 to 2025 in a particular country.
The line graph provides information about the amount of GDP
government
Correct article usage
the government
expend
on Verb problem
spends
health
, education and road
& railways between 25 years from 2000 to 2025 in a specific country.
Overall
,the expenditure of
education and Change preposition
on
road
facilities slightly decrease during 25 years.while
,
Remove the comma
apply
health
became more valuable and government
expending Correct article usage
the government
highest
amount of money for Correct article usage
the highest
this
zone.
In 2000,4% of GDP alocated
to Correct your spelling
allocated
health
and road
& railroad but the cost of health
dramatically increased to 7.2% .while
the road
proportion remain
Wrong verb form
remained
steadty
and it Correct your spelling
steady
was increase
from 4% in 2000 to 4.5 by 2015 and Change the verb form
was increased
then
suddenly decrease
to 3.9% in 2025.
The highest proportion of GDP spending Wrong verb form
decreased
for
education in 2000 but it Change preposition
on
is
went down from 5% in 2000 to 4% by 2025. Unnecessary verb
apply
also
it Add a comma
also,
jomped
to 6.9% in 2005 and had more increase close to 7% before suddenly drop.Correct your spelling
jumped
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