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The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The chart provides data on the income of restaurant chains in various branches -
Vancouver
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Georgia
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Street
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,
Vancouver
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Dunsmuir
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Street
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, and
Vancouver
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Drake
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Street
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- in 2016.
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, the
Vancouver
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Georgia
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Street
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 branch accounted for the highest stats in every category,
whereas
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this
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 figure for
Drake
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Street
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 was the lowest, except for transaction value. Looking in more detail, the biggest number of transactions was by
Georgia
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Street
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 at 854, these orders were followed by 750
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Dunsmuir
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Street
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 and the lowest one at 390 by
Drake
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Street
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.
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, the value of the operations comprised $10.69 in
Vancouver
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Street
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,
while
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this
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 figure for
Dunsmuir
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Street
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 was $5.61. The extraordinary trend experienced in
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 row is that the
Drake
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 branch was the second highest at $9.02. Regarding the remaining information, 405 eat-in transactions were calculated in
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Georgia
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Street
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, though 358 of these were recorded in
Dunsmuir
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Street
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. The upward trend was observed in terms of eat-in to takeaway sales in all branches, except for
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Street
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 where the number of sales declined from 200 to 190.
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, the most popular meals are Chicken Burger, Chicken Wings, and Chicken Pasta in
Vancouver
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Georgia
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Street
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,
Vancouver
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Dunsmuir
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Street
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, and
Vancouver
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Drake
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Street
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words georgia, street, vancouver, dunsmuir, drake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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