The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

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The table provides information on the comparison of the average sales by three branches of the restaurant including

Vancouver

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Georgia

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Street

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Vancouver

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Dunsmuir

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Street

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and

Vancouver

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Drak

Street

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Overall

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, it is evident that chicken burgers, chicken wings and chicken pasta are the most common foods

are

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apply

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sold.

also

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, the average sales are categorized by

number

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a number

the number

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of transactions

with take

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while taking

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into account dine-in or dine-out.

First,

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Vancouver

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Georgia

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Street

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had the most transaction,

Vancouver

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Dunsmuir

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Street

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was in second place, followed by

Vancouver

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Drak

Street

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with 854, 750 and 390 respectively,

dspite

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despite

Vancouver

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Dunsmuir

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Street

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had the high sold but the value of receipts was the least among other branches with $5.61, the value of the operations comprised $10.69 in

Georgia

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and 9.02 in Drake.

Moreover

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, the take-away receipts were more than eat-in in

Georgia

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Street

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Dunsmuir

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Street

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449 and 392 compared with 405 and 358,

conversely

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, Drak

Street

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experienced better sales in dine-in with 200 transactions.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vancouver, georgia, street, dunsmuir with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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