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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table provides information about the percentage of household monthly earnings in European countries -
France
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,
Germany
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, the UK,
Turkey
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, and
Spain
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 - allocated to different categories.
Overall
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, it is evident that the biggest proportion of expenses was housing in
France
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,
Germany
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, and the UK,
whereas
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this
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 pattern for
Turkey
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 and
Spain
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 was
food
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 and
drink
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. Looking in more detail, the higher spending rates in
France
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 were housing, and
food
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 and
drink
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 at 31%, and 25%, respectively,
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this
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 figure for entertainment accounted for 2 times much than clothing.
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, the proportion rate for housing was 33% in
Germany
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, and other categories comprised 15-22%. Unlike
Germany
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 and
France
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, people consume more
food
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 and
drink
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 which comprised 31% of the total allocation rate in
Spain
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. The smallest percentage of clothing can be seen in
Spain
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, at 8%, the housing and entertainment rates accounted for around 15% and 18%, respectively. Regarding the remaining countries, the largest percentage of housing
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 up in the UK at 37% as opposed to the other cities, though
this
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 figure for
Turkey
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 was around 20%. Another of the highest stats was observed in
Turkey
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 in terms of
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food
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 and
drink
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 at 36%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, germany, turkey, spain, food, drink with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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