The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The given tale illustrates information about the average of three different restaurants' sales in Vancouver in 2016.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the restaurant located on Georgia
Street
was more famous than others
while
there were fewest
transactions
in ones on Drake
Street
.
To begin
with, compared between Georgia
Street
and Drake
Street
, 854
transactions
were made on the former
while
390
transactions
were recorded on the latter.
In contrast
, there were small differences between them, costing 10.69 dollars and 9.02 dollars, respectively. On Georgia
street
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Street
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, 449 consumers preferred to take-away
while
405 customers being lower than take-away people wanted to eat-in.
However
, on Drake
Street
, the 200 number of people who want to eat-in slightly exceeded take-away consumers.
On the other hand
, the average
transactions
in the restaurants on Dunsmuir
Street
had a median value that
were
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was
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750, 358, and 392, respectively. There were 750
transactions
. Especially, the cost of transaction value was the cheapest being recorded at 5.61 dollars, compared with others. and most popular items in all restaurants were cooked from
chicken
, which were
chicken
burger
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burgers
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,
chicken
wings and
chicken
pasta.
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