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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the total duration of phone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002, measured in billions of minutes. The data is divided into three categories: local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line, and mobile calls.
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, all categories experienced a significant rise during the period, with mobile calls showing the most dramatic
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extension
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,
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 the usage of local fixed lines
initially
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 multiplied, it eventually declined, returning to its original level by the end of the period. A notable trend is the exponential growth in mobile call usage, which increased tenfold over the seven years. National and international calls
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 but moderate increase.
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, local lines' percentage fluctuated, peaking before declining to the starting point by 2002.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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