The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The line graphs illustrate information on the usage of electricity for different purposes
such
as in refrigerators, vacuum and washing machines and the number of hours per week it was used in the period from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the utilization of electronic gadgets had
decreased over time, Wrong verb form
has
while
the use of electronic items had
increased from the past in the Wrong verb form
has
last
years.
To begin
with, the number of hours of electricity usage was at its peak in 1920(50), however
, a decline was noticed from 1960 to 2019 and it only remained at 10 at the end
.
On the one hand, the freezer was the product that consumed the lowest amount of electricity in its initial years(5%) while
witnessing an upsurging trend after 1940, it was at the peak and that with a vacuum cleaner which was the second most used appliance after washing machine at 100%. Interestingly, a surging trend had been noticed in every item after the year 1940.Submitted by k7jassu on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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