The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar
chart
illustrates the proportion of kids from two Asian and two African countries
, participating in four types of activities in year
2018. From the Change the article
the year
chart
it is visible that Add a comma
chart,
popularity
of activities Correct article usage
the popularity
were
quite equal among the Change the verb form
was
children
in all countries
.
Studying the bar chart
in more detailed
, it can be clearly seen that computer games Replace the word
detail
was
the most popular activity in all four Change the verb form
were
countries
(from 40 per cent
of children
in China to 60 per cent
of children
in Nigeria). In opposite, reading was the least popular activity among children
in Malaysia, China
, with 20 per Correct word choice
and China
cent
and 15 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
children
respectively, and with 10 per cent
of children
in Nigeria and Sudan. 30 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
children
in all countries
spent
their leisure time watching TV. Wrong verb form
spend
Popularity
of board games varied from 20 to 30 percent among the Add an article
The popularity
countries
.
In conclusion, the bar chart
shows that the most popular activity among children
in all above mentioned
Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
countries
was computer games,
Remove the comma
apply
while
reading was the least popular spending of leisure time.Submitted by rasav on
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