The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two presented diagrams illustrate the differences between the natural process of
water
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the water
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cycle
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in
the
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forested and urban areas. The
cycle
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has six stages, namely: precipitation, infiltration, baseflow, erosion, runoff, transpiration and evaporation. The forested and urban
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area
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perform only the first step alike, the precipitations.
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, there are dramatic differences in the quantity and quality of the
folloing
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following
steps of the process. The first issue is the infiltration of the urban
area
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being
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significantly reduced and causing low baseflow,
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the forested
area
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encounters no
such
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problems.
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, the
irregulations
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regulations
in the urban habitat cause an increase in erosion, followed by increased polluted runoff,
therefore
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affecting the
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.
This
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causes irregularities in the transpiration and evaporation
stage
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. In spite of
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, the forested
area
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has no
such
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complications, maintaining a regulated process.
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, the two diagrams present differences between the forested and urban areas in the water
cycle
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, with the urban irregularities being pointed out by reduced performance and increased pollution.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cycle, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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