The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The given line chart compares data about the fraction of cost alternatives for 3 various metals namely, Copper, Nickel, and Zinc in 2014.
Overall
, it was important that the price of all of them other than Zinc reduced over the period of 12 months.
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the diagram, at the start, Nickel, the most alternative from the Linking Words
last
month in January, hit 6%; it declined overwhelmingly and reached the nadir at -3% in Linking Words
June
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however
, it rose moderately to -1% in July and its portion stabilized until September; Linking Words
then
it decreased slightly to -1% in October, but it climbed to 1% in November and December. In the beginning, Copper touched 2%; Linking Words
thereafter
, it jumped and peaked at 3% in February, yet it dipped significantly to the minimum point at -1% in Linking Words
June
after that, it grew to roughly -0.5% in July and Use synonyms
its
trend stabilised until September; Correct pronoun usage
it
then
it fell to the same percentage at Linking Words
June
in October; Use synonyms
thereafter
, it went up considerably to 2% in December.
The graph demonstrates that Zink scored 2% in January; Linking Words
then
it dropped somewhat to nearly -0.5% , the lowest mark, from May to Linking Words
June
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then
it improved to 1% in July and its fashion was constant until September; Linking Words
then
it decreased to almost 0.5% in October until November; Linking Words
finally
, it 1% rose to 1.5% in December.Linking Words
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