Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What extent do yo agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.
In recent years, growing traffic and
pollution
is
a significant problem. Petrol and other resources caused Wrong verb form
has been
Correct article usage
an increase
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
the
Correct article usage
apply
pollution
more
. Some groups of Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
agree with
that increasing the price of these non-reusable resources can prevent the effects on nature. Change preposition
apply
However
, people
have different views on this
agreement.
On the one hand
using electrical resources can help with decreasing Add a comma
hand,
the
Correct article usage
apply
pollution
. For instance
, governments should replace public transport with electrical vehicles. Besides
, citizens should use
busses
or metros to help with Correct your spelling
buses
this
problem. If these innovations will be proceeding
, Wrong verb form
proceed
it
may reduce the usage of Correct pronoun usage
they
petrols
.
Change the wording
petrol
kinds of petrol
cans of petrol
gallons of petrol
On the other hand
, people
should use
electrical
vehicles rather than petrol-driven vehicles. And these improvements should be supported by the government. Replace the word
electric
Moreover
, citizens should use
public transport between short distances. In spite of it is not necessary to use
cars to travel between
short Change preposition
apply
distance
, and there Fix the agreement mistake
distances
is
lots of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
choice's
to travel in Change noun form
choices
Add an article
an eco
eco friendly
way. Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
Additionally
, governments should give privilege
to citizens who Fix the agreement mistake
privileges
use
non-pollution
way
of Fix the agreement mistake
ways
traveling
.
In conclusion, there Change the spelling
travelling
is
lots of ways to avoid Change the verb form
are
pollution
. Some people
think it is the best way to increase the price of fuels to prevent traffic pollution
. However
, my view is that people
should give importance to this
problem because it will affect our life
in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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