You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar graph illustrates the total expenses several European
countries
invest
in their health industry in the years 2002, 2007, and 2012, measured as Wrong verb form
invested
precentages
of their GDP.
Other than Belgium, Spain, Estonia and Switzerland, all Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
countries
experienced fluctuations during the given time period. Most of them presented a
increase in Change the article
an
the
expenses during the Correct article usage
apply
10-years
period, Correct your spelling
10-year
such
as Slovania
, Norway and Lithuania, Correct your spelling
Slovenia
who
have experienced a 1% rise. Correct pronoun usage
which
However
, there are countries
who
have not Correct pronoun usage
that
spend
as much in 2012 compared to 2007, namely France, with a 2% decrease during Wrong verb form
spent
this
5-year span.
Apart from comparing data of individual countries
over the 2002-2012 years, there are differences between several countries
' expenditure on health. The largest gap is between Estonia and Switzerland, having 8% of their GDP separating them.
Overall
, the presented graph shows fluctuations in most of the countries
, having only a few that remain stable throughout. Generally, there are no great differences between the investments of a country over the years, however
when comparing data from two Add a comma
however,
countries
, there is usually a significant change.Submitted by mariaflacau20 on
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