The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table represents the percentage of students who prefer certain types of secondary
schools
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across four categories between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
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, only community
schools
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experienced an increase over the
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,
while
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the other three dropped either a significant or slight decline. Looking in more detail, in 2000 voluntary-controlled
schools
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comprised the majority of the attendees, making up 52% of the total. Followed by grammar
schools
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with 24%, and specialist
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as well as
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community
schools
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at half lower.
Although
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community-based showed the smallest number in the initial
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next
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it increased threefold at 32%.
On the other hand
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, specialist
schools
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dropped by 1%, showing no significant fall in 2005.
Similarly
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, the proportion of pupils in grammar-based and voluntary-controlled
schools
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decreased by 19% and 38%, respectively, in 2005. In the
last
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,
schools
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of the community type continued to grow and became the most popular
schools
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in 2009, reaching 58% of the total attendance.
Besides
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that, the number of voluntary-controlled
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plunged nearly double with a fifth in 2009, trailed by grammar classes and specialist classes that remained downward
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12% and 10%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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