The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about how many films
are
rented or sold by a specific store from 2002 to 2011. Wrong verb form
were
Rentals
and sales
are listed into four categories: rentals
, VHS sales
, DVD sales
and Blu-ray sales
.
Overall
, rentals
experienced a negative trend over the given period, while
DVD sales
initially
saw a postive
trend, but Correct your spelling
positive
have
a little decrease after their peak in 2007. VHS Wrong verb form
had
sales
has
a Change the verb form
have
drammatically
decrease, as they Correct your spelling
dramatically
come
to zero in 2006, and never had another sale. Wrong verb form
came
On the other hand
, blu-ray sales
, that
first appeared on the market in 2007, Correct pronoun usage
which
rised
regularly until 2011.
Correct your spelling
rose
Rentals
started in 2002 with approximately 185,000 copies
, but ended in 2011 with just under 60,000, after a regular decline. In contrast
to that, DVD sales
became four time
higher between 2002 and 2007, with a highest of just over 200,000 Change to a plural noun
times
copies
. After that
they Add a comma
that,
shown
a Wrong verb form
showed
little
drop to nearly 180,000 Correct word choice
small
sales
in 2011.
VHS sales
drammatically
drop between 2002 and 2006. They started Correct your spelling
dramatically
by
approximately 85,000 annual Change preposition
with
copies
and reached zeros in 2006. Blu-ray sales
began in 2007 and have a little increase, reaching around 12,000 copies
in 2011.Submitted by alessandrorepola.repola on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rentals, sales, copies with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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