The bar chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart reveals information regarding the split section of households given by gender in Great Britain.
Overall
,
Females
in household tasks experienced a went up to went downtrend.
while
,
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Males's
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work showed a downward trend throughout the period. Both, divisions of housework had some fluctuations As can be seen from the bar graph, the biggest increase over the relevant period occurred in the cooking and baking category particularly
females
from six different segments reaching a peak of approximately seventy-two in the first section
while
males
witnessed the third biggest decrease at 30
minutes
per person per day. At the same time for the cleaning house tidying
females
saw the second biggest increase at nearly fifty-nine
minutes
compared to eleven for men.
However
,
males
biggest increase occurred in gardening, and Pet care at fifty
minutes
per person compared to twenty
minutes
for
females
. It is possible to see from the bar chart that
while
females
dominated the chores in the house, there is
also
statistical evidence that men dominated the gardening, and Pet care at fifty to twenty between
males
and
females
respectively.
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