The table provides a comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education and training and participation rate of 18-24 year olds in the same in five nations in the year 2002

The table provides a comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education and training and participation rate of 18-24 year olds in the same in five nations in the year 2002
The table compares the
rate
of training and
participation
among 18-24 years old and the government's
expenditure
rate
on education in five countries in 2002
Overall
, five countries were at different rates
for example
,Poland had the lowest
expenditure
rate
Slovenia had the highest Poland had the highest
participation
among others and Romania had the lowest
rate
. As the table shows, first in Poland the
expenditure
rate
was 5% and
participation
was 44% in 2002 next
one
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in the Czech Republic 9% was the
expenditure
rate
and 27% in
participation
, next Romania was 9% in
expenditure
and 27% in
participation
then
Hungary was 13% and 34% in
expenditure
and
participation
rate
the
last
one is Slovenia it was 25%
expenditure
rate
and 40%
participation
in 2002.
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