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The table below presents the perceptions of CEOs and their partners/spouses as to the main causes of stress in the CEO lifestyle. Items are expressed as percentages and more than one response was permitted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below presents the perceptions of CEOs and their partners/spouses as to the main causes of stress in the CEO lifestyle. Items are expressed as percentages and more than one response was permitted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the proportion of stress in the CEO lifestyle caused by eight main
factors
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, responses from
CEOs
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 and their
partners
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 or
spouses
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 with multiple choices being allowed.
Overall
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, there are huge gaps between stressful
factors
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. From
CEOs
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’ perspective, the demands of
work
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 in private life are the major contributor to pressure,
while
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 their
partners
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 and
spouses
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 consider
work
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-related travel as the top reason that leads to stress. In detail, both
CEOs
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 and their
partners
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 or
spouses
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 have similar concerns about time or deadlines, interpersonal relations, and taking
work
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 home, accounting for nearly 60%, over 21%, and around 24%, respectively.
In contrast
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, the other
factors
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 show great differences. Demands of
work
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 on private life and on relationships with family are more common sources of stress with
CEOs
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 than their
partners
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 or
spouses
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, the former is chosen by 68% of
CEOs
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 and 23% of their
partners
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 or
spouses
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while
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 the latter factor with 45% and 29% respectively. For the rest of the three
factors
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 -
work
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-related travel,
work
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 overload, and long working hours -
CEOs
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’
partners
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 or
spouses
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 regard these reasons highly: the percentages are 87%, 62%. and 62%,
whereas
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 the figures for
CEOs
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 are 39%, 37%, and 24% only.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words factors, ceos, partners, spouses, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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