For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter- * state what type of membership you have and how much you have paid for it? * explain how you have benefited from the club * give reasons on why you want to leave
Hello , MR
Osama
Add the comma(s)
Osama,
i
want to be persistent in your class , But , I am determined to cancel my membership for many reasons.
Change the capitalization
I
Firstly
, I have had many levels of club
, cause , I changed it more than two times , Add an article
the club
i
was looking for what the most comfortable for me , And , it was Change the capitalization
I
VIP
of Correct article usage
the VIP
club
the Add an article
the club
a club
last
one i
had , I paid 200 dollars every week , Change the capitalization
I
However
, that price was including discount 20 per cent .
Secondly
, My body was improved by the club , Also
i
feel better than before , I have had bad emotions , Change the capitalization
I
However
, Now my emotions and my feeling
So much better.
Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
Finally
, I would like to tell you my reasons for cancelling the membership , I got a new baby now as you know the children need taken care of them
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Also
, i
represent my company in an exhibition .
Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you .Change the capitalization
I
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greeting and closing
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The Closing
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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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