The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layouts illustrate the Stokeford village in 1930 and in 2010, after its reconstruction.
Overall
, the household area was extended, with the transformation of farmland into territories adapted to the comfortable life of people. It is noticeable that the large house ,
along with
its gardens, was converted into a retirement home. Focusing first on the household land, in 2010, the total number of facilities for their residents increased significantly in the north, which were built along the extended road on both sides of the main road, where previously used to be farmland, on the east, and shops on the opposite side. A similar picture can be seen below, in the other area which was used for farming. It was
also
substituted by a new way for vehicles, in order to provide a good transport link for the inhabitants of constructed, just next to the road, buildings. As for the remaining facilities, the primary school, on the east, remained in its former place, but it became twice bigger. The private large house, below the school, was
also
altered and became a retirement house, with the extension of its territory.
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  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
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