The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017
The chart demonstrates the proportion of
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the population
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in one country, who read news through different media platforms in 2013,2015 and 2017.
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, even though some media channels suffered a decrease from 2013 to 2017, others remained the same or steadily increased. Mainly, printed newspapers and
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the internet
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experienced high differences in their number of users.
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of television and radio showed similar patterns, with both experiencing a slight decrease, starting
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2013.
However
, the radio did not face a drastic change, remaining at 30%. Meanwhile, television fell to under 70% and slightly recovered in 2017, reaching a peak of 71%. Printed
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were the least popular of the four, it went down from above 40% to 20%. The media channel that experienced an increase at a steady rate was the
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.
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began at slightly above 30% and, in
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to the other three, it kept increasing over the years.
Hence
, it
then
increased sharply over the following four years, reaching its peak of almost 70%.
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