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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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THE LINE GRAPH GIVES INFORMATION ON TRANSPORTING
OF
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THE AMOUNTS OF
GOOD
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GOODS
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 BY FOUR VARIOUS MEANS OF TRANSPORT IN THE UK FROM 1974 TO 2002.
OVERALL
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,
IT IS CLEAR THAT
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 ALL MEANS OF
TRANSPORTS
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 SHOWED AN UPWARD TREND,
HOWEVER
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 GOODS WHICH TRANSPORTED BY ROAD WERE HIGHER THAN OTHERS. IN TERMS OF ROAD TRANSPORT, IN 1974 APPROXIMATELY 70
MILLION
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 TONNES OF GOODS
TRANSPORTED
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WERE TRANSPORTED
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 BY ROAD, WHICH IS THE HIGHEST AMONG
FOUR
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THE FOUR
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 CATEGORIES. IT CONTINUED
INCREASE
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SLIGHLTY
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SLIGHTLY
 OVER THE PERIOD,
WHICH
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REACHING NEARLY A PEAK OF 98
MILLION
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AT
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 2002. WATER TRANSPORTATION STARTED FROM 40
MILLION
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 AND THERE WAS A GRADUAL INCREASE THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD. TURNING TO LESS FAVORED MEANS OF
TRANSPORTATIONS
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TRANSPORTATION
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, WILD FLUCTUATION WAS OBSERVED IN THE FIGURES
OF
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FOR
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 RAIL. THERE WAS A DOWNWARD TREND IN
TH
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THE
 PATTERNS OF PIPELINE,
STARTED
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 FROM WELL BELOW 20
MILLION
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 , EVEN IF INCREASED OVER THE PERIOD, IT WAS STILL
LEAST
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THE LEAST
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 FAVORED CATEGORY.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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