The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
THE LINE GRAPH GIVES INFORMATION ON TRANSPORTING
OF
THE AMOUNTS OF Change preposition
apply
GOOD
BY FOUR VARIOUS MEANS OF TRANSPORT IN THE UK FROM 1974 TO 2002.
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GOODS
OVERALL
, IT IS CLEAR THAT
ALL MEANS OF TRANSPORTS
SHOWED AN UPWARD TREND, Fix the agreement mistake
TRANSPORT
HOWEVER
GOODS WHICH TRANSPORTED BY ROAD WERE HIGHER THAN OTHERS.
IN TERMS OF ROAD TRANSPORT, IN 1974 APPROXIMATELY 70 MILLION
TONNES OF GOODS TRANSPORTED
BY ROAD, WHICH IS THE HIGHEST AMONG Add a missing verb
WERE TRANSPORTED
FOUR
CATEGORIES. IT CONTINUED Correct article usage
THE FOUR
INCREASE
Fix the infinitive
TO INCREASE
SLIGHLTY
OVER THE PERIOD, Correct your spelling
SLIGHTLY
WHICH
REACHING NEARLY A PEAK OF 98 Correct pronoun usage
apply
MILLION
AT
2002. WATER TRANSPORTATION STARTED FROM 40 Change preposition
IN
MILLION
AND THERE WAS A GRADUAL INCREASE THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD.
TURNING TO LESS FAVORED MEANS OF TRANSPORTATIONS
, WILD FLUCTUATION WAS OBSERVED IN THE FIGURES Fix the agreement mistake
TRANSPORTATION
OF
RAIL. THERE WAS A DOWNWARD TREND IN Change preposition
FOR
TH
PATTERNS OF PIPELINE, Correct your spelling
THE
STARTED
FROM WELL BELOW 20 Wrong verb form
STARTING
MILLION
, EVEN IF INCREASED OVER THE PERIOD, IT WAS STILL LEAST
FAVORED CATEGORY.Correct article usage
THE LEAST
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