The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one town in 1990, 2000, and 2010

The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one town in 1990, 2000, and 2010
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The table below gives information about the proportion of male and female employees in distinct areas of employment in a particular country between 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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, significant differences are evident,
while
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manufacturing showed a notable decline in male employment and females exceeded an increase in health and tourism fields. Retail / shops experienced a minimal change for both genders during
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period. During the given period retail and shops remained stable in male employment at 13%,
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the health industry stood at the same in the first two decades and showed an increase in 2010 from 7% to 9%.
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, tourism diminished in 1990 by close to 13% and remained unaltered in the
last
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two decades, roughly 10%. Slightly 30% of male workers shrank by half in 2000 and in 2010 the percentage dropped by two-thirds of what it was at the beginning. The percentage of women working in the retail and shops sector rose slightly from 7% in 1990 to 9% in 2010. These minor changes
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indicated in tourism by growing at 2% in each ten-year span. In health fields, female employers again revealed expansion slightly over 9%, 11% and 15 % in each decadal period. Specifically, at the beginning women employers demonstrated an expansion in 2000 from 7% to 8%,meanwhile, in 2010 steadily lowered
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3%.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment trends
  • gender-based preferences
  • industry employment
  • male-dominated industry
  • female participation
  • employment opportunities
  • traditional association
  • gender disparity
  • equal male and female employment
  • evolutionary trends
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