You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement
Dear Manjot
Hope you are doing great.
Its
been a year Replace the word
It's
It is
to
Correct word choice
since to
meet
you. I was really excited to Wrong verb form
met
met
you but Change the verb
meet
unfortunately
Add a comma
unfortunately,
i
have to change the date Change the capitalization
I
one
month later Change preposition
to one
from
the agreed date
My sister gave Change preposition
than
a
birth to a baby boy. So she is going to stay at my place for a month. If Remove the article
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
will
not there to help her she will Verb problem
am
very
disappointed.
Add a missing verb
be very
Moreover
, i
am the only person in Change the capitalization
I
house
for her help. Add an article
the house
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
i
need to reschedule the date Change the capitalization
I
in
Change preposition
for
march
Capitalize word
March
instead
of February.
Its
very hard for me because Replace the word
It's
It is
from
Change preposition
for
very
long i excited to Correct article usage
a very
met
you. Indeed after receiving Wrong verb form
meet
this
mail you will hurt your schedule will disturbed. I am very sorry for this
but the situation made me to
do Change the verb form
apply
this
. I already apply
for Wrong verb form
applied
visa
. After getting Add an article
the visa
a visa
visa
Correct article usage
a visa
i
will book flights Change the capitalization
I
of
Change preposition
for
23rd
of Correct article usage
the 23rd
march
.
Hope you will not disappoint. We will meet you soon.
Your lovingly
SimarCapitalize word
March
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coherence cohesion
Work on separating different ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity and focus on each aspect of your message.
task response
Clarify some of your statements to ensure full understanding by the reader, such as mentioning exactly how you plan to help your sister.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-off, making it feel personal and polite.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a personal message to a friend, showing sincerity and care.
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