Studies shows that many criminals do not receive enough education, for this reason, people believe that the best ways to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find a job after being released. Do you agree or disagree.

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of crimes committed each year

are

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dramatically increasing

due to

many factors. There is an opinion that

education

could eliminate the criminal rates and preserve people from crime commitment. Others believe that

such

measure

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will not give

sufficiant

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sufficient

results.

Although

there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly

belive

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that

education

should be conducted in prisons. One argument put forward in favour of

education

is that criminal activity is

favored

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by low-income among certain people and their desire to get what others have. In order to tackle

such

problem

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problems

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the job-seeking processes should be facilitated and criminals should be taught the reliable

knowledges

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knowledge

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to find a job after being released. These measures will prevent them from stealing and defrauding other people, as their income would be sufficient to cover their needs.

For instance

,

in

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many countries where an educational system in prisons when being released, showed

the

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increadible

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incredible

decline

of

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criminal incidents.

Thus

, it could be

useful

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way to help former prisoners to be involved in society, as it permits them to socialize and find new connections outside the prison.

However

, it could be prohibitively expensive to educate the criminals, as we must consider teachers'

salary

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salaries

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and special lecture

room

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rooms

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, which will probably require rebuilding the prison. Tax rates devoted to prisons are high and it could become

overhelming

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overwhelming

, reducing the financial

ressources

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resources

dedicated

for

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medical chores, public transport and maintenance of historical buildings.

Nevertheless

, in my

opinion

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whilst these duties are important, the most crucial task for today is to help prisoners to retake their normal life and

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safety in the cities,

otherwise

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we will not be able to use subways without fear and admire the monuments without meeting a pickpocket. In conclusion, I would like to say that

this

problem is multileveled and we should consider it not only in terms of

education

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but

also

psychological therapy and even psychiatric help, as mental illness often overcome the acquired

knowledges

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knowledge

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.