Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

There is no denying the fact that hard

drugs

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utilization

is prohibit

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globally.

While

it is a commonly held belief that

alcohol

and

tobacco

are allowed by some

governments

, there is

also

an argument that

encourage

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to regulate

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the

tobacco

and

alcohol

usage because they

considered

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drugs

after all. In my opinion, I tend to believe that the sale and use of all

kind

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of

drugs

includes

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tobacco

and

alcohol

should

be regulate

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by

governments

.

To begin

with, narcotics and controlled medication that

consider

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as

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a hard

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hard drugs

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drugs

are already regulated

in

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all

governments

for medical usage.

However

, dealing with hard

drugs

is

prohibit

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in all

country

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due to

its effect.

In other words

, banning

people

from using these

drugs

is a must, because it will

led

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to addiction if it

taken

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with no medical reason.

For example

, studies have proven that all hard

drugs

will damage the brain cells of the addict. Another point to consider

,

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is that addicted

people

must allocate in specific facilities to contain their

dangers

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behaviors. It is

also

possible to say that,

governments

cannot

banned

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tobacco

and

alcohol

because

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of its

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its

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adverse

effect

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not

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compared to hard

drugs

.

For instance

, smoking and drinking

people

would not

consider

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be considered

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as addicted

people

and they will not be affected

such

as using hard

drugs

. In conclusion, despite

people

having different points of view, I'm convinced that

governments

must totally prohibit all hard

drugs

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usage,

however

, the utilization of

alcohol

and

tobacco

shall

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be regulate

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to protect

the societies

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.