The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above
presnts
two types of hot drinks which are Correct your spelling
presents
coffee
and tea that four countries
imports
Change the verb form
import
them
in large weights. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
are Canada
, the US, UK
, and Germany.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, according to
the graph, the highest country that imports tea is UK
, it imports around 80000 Correct article usage
the UK
tonnes
per year, however
, the lowest rate
is the US and Canada
since that
they are Correct word choice
apply
appoximately
close to each other, they import around 2000 Correct your spelling
approximately
tonnes
per year.
Firstly
, Coffee
is being imported by these four countries
, however
, Canada
and the US have an apporximately
close Correct your spelling
approximately
approximate
rate
in
Change preposition
of
coffee
wieghts
which is around 40000 Correct your spelling
weights
tonnes
. In contrast
, UK
shows the lowest Correct article usage
the UK
in
Change preposition
apply
coffee
rate
whereas
Germany overtook them all with a rate
of 50000 tonnes
which is the highest at
all.
Change preposition
in
Secondly
, tea is the other type, which UK
beats all Correct article usage
the UK
countries
in
a Change preposition
at
rate
of 80000 tonnes
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
shown in the graph. Correct your spelling
as
Moreover
, Germany has an averge
number of 40000 Correct your spelling
average
tonnes
. Finally
, the US and Canada
show the same number which is 20000 tonnes
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