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The charts below show the percentage of water used for defferent purposes in six areas of the world.

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The pie charts
illuatrate
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illustrate
 the amount of
water
 which is used for different aims in six regions of the globe.
Overall
, three major usages of
water
 including industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
, have been shown on the graphs. What stands out from the charts is that agriculture is the main cause of
water
use
 in four areas out of six. If we look
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Africa,
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Central and
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South East Asia
use
 over four-fifths of their
water
 sources in agriculture.
By contrast
,
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North America and
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Europe spend
approximatly
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approximately
 one-third of their
sources
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 on it.
Morover
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Moreover
, these two developed regions
use
 around half of their
water
 in their industry. Less developed areas mostly
use
 under 10% of their
water
 for industrial purposes. Domestic
use
 of
water
 is around 15% in
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North and
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South America, and
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Europe.
However
, it is less than one-tenth of
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use
 in three other regions.
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